Next time I shoot I will try to make the subject not so much in the middle, make the photos lighter, and when editing use radial gradients. I also will get closer in the photos.
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Next time I shoot I will try to make the subject not so much in the middle, make the photos lighter, and when editing use radial gradients. I also will get closer in the photos.
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I like the focus and depth of field on the photos of the water droplets on the plant. In the two photos of the flower I like the second one better because it isn’t so dark. I think you could get closer in some of the photos to keep out any distractions. I’m not sure if you edited already but it would be interesting to see you use radial gradients to your advantage, so you can make the subject really stand out. I think your images are all properly exposed, but you could brighten them up a bit more.
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try different DoF’s to put more in focus, and try to use the rule of thirds because most of the subjects are in the middle of the photo
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Overall, I like what you are seeing but compositionally you missed the mark with these. Definitely an area of focus for you in your next round of shooting. Think about elements and principles of design, what you want to accentuate in each subject and how to utilize contrast, unity, hierarchy, etc to your advantage. Play with Dof and get yourself a set of close-up filters or extension tubes so you are taking real close-ups. Exposure looks good.
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